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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
just wrote this hope you like it bags packed one the ground ready to go look around take bags down the stairs say goodbye no one cares going now out the door look back no more shut trunk open door clear junk on the floor key in turn ignition start to drive on with mission down the street realize now i love you god how that is why i’m here today the is why i’m her to stay somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice one here pal. I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ditto to Dopey's sentiments. Nice poem. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
This one is great! nicely done! keep up the great job, and keep posting! Luv always, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Ya, this is good. nice work. Glad you have some one you feel this way about ~Jason |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great imagery keep it up keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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