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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
it is finals week in my school and i wrote this after i took my sicence test. it is about how i have felt my hole life i walk down the street with the sun beating down soon i feel sorrow for all this life's dred i step off the path into the grassy hills not being on the beaten path for my hart it fills and so i do in life not following the main stream blazing my own path for others to follow my dream somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Great poem. Kind of reminds me of Robert Forst's poem "A Road Not Taken"....Thanks for posting this.... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
The title reminded me of the that Frost poem to but the poem itself was unique. You expressed some wisdom in this poem. Nice work. ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
about the poem i cam up with the title on my own without knowing that it was a title from the jack forst colection well thanks for the replys somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice one here. Kind of sad though. I hope all is well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
do what makes you feel better as long as it's for the good I think you do know what i mean hope you get better I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very good thoughts here, I liked your choice of words. Correcting the couple of spelling errors would help it read better, but other than that, this was very well done!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
This is really awesome! Not following what everyone else does, or what everyone thinks you should makes you a stronger person...I think. Oh well if that didn't make any sense it's cuz I'm....and I hava to go to school in like 20 min. Wel great job on this one, keep it up! Luv always, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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