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My Love For You
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My Love For You |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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My love for you is true, The feelings i have for you are real, The knowing that i love you is so great, The passion we feel when our body embrace, Me feeling your arms around me, So sweet, So passionate your kiss was, From the beginning i knew it was love, You touch me in a way no one else has, Yes My love for you is unbearable, I cant take i have to let it out, Tell you my feelings, Let you know how i feel, Here it goes my feelings about you, I love you, I want you, I need you, Or else i am just a silly fool. P.S. I see a lot of new names around here and well i havent been here in a while but i would just like to let you guys know that passions is a great place and welcome and well guess what guys IM BACK for good!!! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's good to see you here at Passions again! This is a great poem. The feelings come through really well. Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to see more! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
well welcome back i was wondering where you went, well welcome back. and i changed my name it used to be mikeykrzy well jsut fyi and i loved the poem and i hope that everything works out somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet poem branden, welcome back!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's so good to see you Branden ... I was wondering where you'd wandered off to! This is a wonderful entry back into the forums ... welcome back!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Excellent job on this one, Branden! I love it! So sweet too!! You are an excellent poet, and don't ever think other wise lol! Great job, keep postin! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey Branden, glad to see you back, nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey!!!!!!!! Long time no see!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am exclamation mark crazed!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't mind me!!!!!!!!!!! Well, byes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Good to see you again Branden great start at posting again make sure you really are back for good  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ooohhh... still have that sincerity in your writing i think thats what i like most about your work theyre always about love, which enlightens my day... even my nights.. great to see you bud ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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