Teen Poetry #4 |
What Is A Friend? |
HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
What is a friend? Are they always there? To help you when your sad, Should they always care? A friend should always be there, Through thick and through thin. To wipe away your lonely tears, So in the end you always win. Friends should not lie, Or treat you bad. They should not say mean words, That often make you mad. So would someone please tell me, What did I do wrong? For so may people to treat me bad, It's happend for so long. They think that I should be there, Whenever life get's tough. Even though they're not here for me... I think I've had enough! I would drop everything, If you needed me by your side. But would you do it for me? You said you would but you lied. "Friends forever," We all once said. But you guys don't respect me Like you once did. I'm leaving this friendship, But never will I forget. The great times we had, Which I will never regret. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
nice I like that know the feeling of the whole friend thing hope it gets better |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
*Mwah* kisses to you i owuld like to talk to you more i love your poetry keep writing |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i enjoyed this greatly... and the message was a real and nice one...thanks for sharing...and hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. Wonderful poem about your friend, the message was great. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ashley, I'm glad to read this poem... although I know the feelings you are saying in here as you've told me before. You know where I stand on this. I really did enjoy the poem. Try a new format though, next time I talk to you I'm going to make a note of showing you some. See you around, kiddo. Keep your head high. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
heavens angel, i think we have all suffered through the stage when we find that our "friends" aren't exactly willing to commit to our ties after all there are no easy solutions to ease the ache but i sincerely hope that you will feel better soon.... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
"Friends forever," We all once said. But you guys don't respect me Like you once did. You have no idea how much that stanza relates to my friendships in the past..i can only name a few people i've been friends with throughout my life. Some things happen for a reason and i guess the loss of these friendships was just meant to happen although i am sorry...::hugs:: |
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