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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
I lay in bed at night alone and afraid looking out the window watching the rain as it falls on the ground wishing my life was as simple as rain rain falls and rises over and over again it never forms or disappears it's just there tears begin to fall just as the rain does each tear forms and falls just as the raindrops do one falls, another one forms continuing like a storm until that bright ray of sunshine breaks through the clouds and all the world is smiling again "Well if you just close your eyes and just imagine everything's alright you should not hide your tears cuz they were sent to wash away those years" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey Bocachica. Great poem, don't I know how that feels!! Keep posting aye? Bel |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
so many sad poems remember, you can also look at rain as a way of cleaning or clensing  maybe it also does some good as crying does -- just a thoughtbeautiful post curly I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. The ending was an unexpected positive one. Good  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
wow, severly sad one there. Great ending though. I liked it alot. Keep posting. >¶Øʆ< |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Title reminds me of that Madonna song. This is very sad, but the ending shows promise, good luck!! And nice writing. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was awesome! i luv it! It was really well written too!! great job, Keep postin! Luv Always, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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