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Why do girls whine about the pick up line
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Why do girls whine about the pick up line |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
What's wrong with the pick up line I mean so what if I think your fine would you rather me act like an idiot in a way that you would rather forget So what if I ask if your feet hurt did you fall from heaven land in the dirt I lost my way home can I go with you I'm Looking place to stay what do you want me to do I mean would you rather have me freeze in the cold when I could have you in my arms to hold Oh wait that's cheesy right just another line I mean what if I truely wanted you to be mine So what if I lost the number for my phone maybe after a while I can call yours my own Is this just to hard of a thing to ask Is this ceasing of nagging an impossible task Oh well I guess I'll keep my lines to my self Maybe right a book and put them on a shelf. I mean right guys we try to make the girl smile and they tell us to take a hike walk another mile unappreciative I tell you nothing more nothing less this whole pick up line thing has caused us a mess Hey I guess they never know what they will miss because as the Ole Hammer said you can't touch this. Hmmm quote for me is as follows: Stupid CUPID stop pickin on me lol The Rescue |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
babe that was cute! hehe you know you can come home with me lol! well anyways hun welcome to passions! i hope this isn't the only poem you write. robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm guessing this was a rebuttle for the girl who wrote the other one...LOL I think there is nothing wrong with pick-up lines, as long as you're using them with humour and good taste. You know? Some guys are just plain cheesy, and really believe girls will buy all of that nonsense. hehe Nice rebuttle, and welcome to passions!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  I've always enjoyed a good pick up line...creative guys who add fun to it always got my time.... I hope you post more too....and please check your email for a special greeting! SEA |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Hehe, I liked this poem, well written, and hope to read alot more of your work. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol hmmmmmmm i wonder if this is who i think it is.. yup i think it is  lols i wont tells thos if tis u btw! *hugs* i like this muchs and this just lets me know that u r a good writer and makes me want to c more of ur stuffish soooooo i think ill bugs ya till ya lets me:P lols jk great job!tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
thanx for the encouragement us guys need some support to. But yeah pic up lines can be fun for the most part. Mostly if they make a girl laugh |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
ok seriously who do you think I am? lol |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tiff you leave jimmy alone! hes mine lol! you have ben! robin |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
darn it! its not him  jimmy u dodo grrrs@ulol :P but i likes ur stuffs newayz *hugs* tiff <~~~ mine not urs robin u dork“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
IT'S A CONSPIRACY!!! Oh yeah...great poem and welcome to passions.....  "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
LOL I loved this poem!! I don't think all pick up lines are cheesy but some guys just play them out to be I would so take you home with me! lol Here is my fav pick up line. If I ruled the world, I would change the alaphabet so U and I could be closer together Awe Neways keep writing And welkum to passions |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
weclome to passions..that was sooo cute!!! and it gives a whole new perspective on the puckup line thing hehe awsome job! *KiMMiE* |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
this is too cute to not put in my library! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hey...great job on the poem...haha...we as GUYS gotta fight back!!  ...haha i enjoyed this a lot...keep writing...and welcome to passions...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem, Well done I really enjoyed the read... welcome to passions... Zu |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions. Well done on the poem. Hope to see more of you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow hun people like your pick up line better than mine! well anyways babe talk to ya later! oh by the way do you want some craigs brother stickers? Robin |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
yeah hook me up yo thanx |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This was too funny...this pick-up line trend is now a legend. Welcome to the madness! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Omg this is the third poem today i read about pick-up lines...what is with this?? LoL i dont even care about them...i think their kinda dumb and corny but i dont WHINE ::cough cough:: |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
W-E-L-C-O-M-E T-O P-A-S-S-I-O-N-S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! enjoyed the poem..there seems to be a trend with the "pick-up-lines" poems...hahaha..am i right?..hey acarly i think there IS a conspiracy!!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey you sexy thing where ya been all my life? well babe i know where you been lol! i could't resist heheh!love ya babe! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to Passions!!! First post, and you're going into my library already. Just one out of 5 in there now. AFter all the poems I've already read. Great write and hope you enjoy staying here in PIP. keep writing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
wow, this is soo cute!! I bet you are too!! U can try one of those lines on me!! ttyl!! tiffany~~ |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
sorry lucky hes mine!hehe robin |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Hey I'm not taken by anyone yet lol |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
love it, love it, love it, love it!!! ahh, it's cute!! hey, I don't mind pick-up lines either, providing you say them in a not-so cheesy way, know what I mean? I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
Great first post! That's really cute! Have you tried all of those lines? Some sounds pretty original to me(Or perhaps it is just my boy-deprived life) I loved your poem and I will keep an eye out for more of yours. Great job! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
well jimmy i'm taking you here and now so there!hehe!love ya babe! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
just taking stuff is theft lol right I'm callin the cops |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
babe taking you is not a crime!if only you knew! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
hey hun, i thought this was really sweet. i really liked it alot. i hope there is a somone you worte this too, b/c if so there really lucky to have a guy like you. i know if a guy told me a chessy pick up line, i would laugh, and go out with him, i think they are so cute. they always make me laugh. i love ppl that make me laugh. and this poem sure made me laugh, thanks for that. ~!kellie!~ |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
nope this wasnt written for anyone. just a rebuttle |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! Cute post.. heh. I'm glad you decided to join us here, and I can't wait to read more. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
What can I say? That was so great! I don't have a problem with those pick up lines... it's the stupid (and vulgar) ones I hate!  That was soooo cute! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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