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angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

0 posted 2001-06-13 12:37 PM

I'll never understand what went wrong
But now I think it's time I move on

I always dreamed you would come back to me
But now I know that will never be

For now we only talk as friends
And I know that this is where our love ends

Know that I'll always love you
I pray that you will always love me too

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-06-13 12:42 PM

I really like this one! Um, maybe (this is just a suggestion) "Realization" or something like that? I don't know.
Anyway, keep writing, the titles aren't always necassary anyway.
Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-06-13 01:21 PM

Great work I really enjoyed the read, for the title... umm something like " Days of realisation" maybe...
Anyway good work.
Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2001-06-13 02:02 PM

Impressive. I don't really have any ideas for a title. But the poem was impressive none the less.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-06-14 01:03 PM

girlie, I like this poem. you need to stop being so down on yerself and yer poetry all the time. you do a great job. and remember, just because you write poetry about someone does NOT mean you are 'stuck' on them. write what you feel...and don't worry about anything else. or write what comes to mind

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-14 05:52 PM

i really liked this poem...the emotions were well written

...hope to see more...bye Kristen

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-14 09:29 PM

I really liked your signature.lol

Your poem was very well done. no clue for a title.

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-16 06:46 PM

This was great. It reminded me of a pumpkin song called "Perfect". It has a lot to do with this poem.
Well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

8 posted 2001-06-16 10:45 PM

Great job Angel!
And as far as titles go...you're on your own in that area...thatis unless you want it titled "Jessica" hahaha.
ANYWAY- Keep postin! I enjoyed this one.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-06-16 10:52 PM

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

DarkSilver
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since 2001-05-21

Posts 33
Six O'clock High!

10 posted 2001-06-16 11:52 PM

how about that second line,
"Time to move on."
sounds like a good title.

I Said I'm sorry but no one heard, Cause ACTIONS, Actions, actions speak louder than words! - Hello McFly - Relient K

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