Teen Poetry #4 |
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The Keys to my Heart |
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ShortSexyAngel777 New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 9Louisiana, USA |
I wrote this for my boyfriend, Josh, weve been together off and on for about 2 years now, and i love him very much. we are talking about marriage, although there are no final plans yet. anyways, were both very stubborn and proud people, as you might notice i mentioned in lines 15 and 16. and it was because of this, that we broke up so much. neither of us would admit that we were in love with the other. so we fought, and hurt each other over and over. FATAL attraction as a friend of mine would put it. we now know that we love each other, and anyways, this is for him. if he ever reads this on here, this is from maryn, his baby girl. The Keys to my Heart You walked into my life, One hot summer day in June. Totally unexpected, just out of the blue. I would never have guessed, How close we would eventually get. After all, you were a stranger, Someone I had just randomly met. As time went on, And the newness of "us" wore off, We tried to distance ourselves. Keep each of us apart. But God obviously, had a different plan. Time and time again, Our paths would cross, And dispite your pride, Dispite my longing to hate you, You soon held the keys to my heart. You now hold, the keys to my heart. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! man ive been aww-ing all day!! hahaha...this is such a sweet poem..and i think that everything you said is synonymous (sp?) to a perfect love story...hahha.....write a screenplay for it SSA.. ![]() i enjoyed it a lot...especially the conclusion..it rocked!... show it to him!!...go on!!..im sure he'd love you even more.. ![]() good luck with the future! "Life is not long and boring, |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i agree with her awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! wow what a cute poem! wish i could write love stories like that! robin ![]() I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a sweet and nice poem...thanks for sharing it with us...and i wish u the best in ur situation... ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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