Teen Poetry #4 |
More Than Anything |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
You have no idea as to what I do, when we get off of the phone. If I've got someone else to talk to, or if I was left all alone. You worry about me sometimes, but I always say I'm okay, so you say you'll call tomorrow, or maybe the next day. More than anything in the world, I want things to work with you, because you understand me, and everything I do. You always say the right things, and make me love you more, and when the time comes to say goodbye, it's you that I adore. You seem to care about me, as much as I care about you, so let me know if you love me, because I love you too. More than anything, I want this to be something, I want this to work out, more than anyything. I know, this is weird, but forgive me, I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great Job Allysa, a wonderful read Zu |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks Zu. I appreciate it. I have to go to school in less than five minutes!!!!!!! UGG!!!! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really liked this piece, so honest, and raw....but very good. I hope you get what you're in need of. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Pure emotions in this piece. I liked it. ~*Nikki*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done here! I enjoyed it. You didn't beat around the bush in this one. I liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
aw...this is such a cute poem..( wrong word i know...)..i enjoyed this for its honesty...sometimes when you're at that stage in a friendship...things like love seem almost forbbiden....bite the bullet allysa..ASK HIM OUT!! nice poem i enjoyed the read thank you much! "Life is not long and boring, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well done...this poem was great...i enjoyed this piece a lot....thanks for the read allysa...and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow kool meaning in this poem! i likes! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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