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Teen Poetry #4

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2001-05-23 12:32 PM

Okay..this one is kind of weird. Written at...five in the morning? I don't really remember. I just wanted to post something cause i haven't in a few days. I found this amusing...hope you do too.

i yell and i yell.
trying to release all this hate.
if i don't stop yelling,
i will eventually break.
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't stop
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
won't stop
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
for fear that i will go insane.
or have i already arrived at the lovely little milestone?
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
i ponder the question as i continue to yell.
sane AHHHHHHH
insane AHHHHHH
two similar words
yet two completely different states of mind.
AHHH!!!!!
what the hell? AHHHHH!!!! might as well keep on yelling!
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
okay i feel a little bit better
but i still cannot seem to sate
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
this desire i seen to have to release all my hate.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
if i get it all out i will be glad
but if i miss some i'm sure i'll end up feeling rather sad.
ooooooh weeeeeeeell
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sadness is an emotion i'm used to.

-fear-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-23 01:20 AM

A powerful poem with a lot of emotion, especially in the last line. Pretty much sums up your whole reason for the rant.
Well done on this one. It really hit me tonight.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-05-23 03:12 AM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! wow i feel better! hey some that writes post at 5 in the mornin to woohoo! it was kool!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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