Teen Poetry #4 |
My Way |
TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
A furious circle with no end, there's no time for wounds to mend cause there's no time for them to care, and good intentions are very rare. From that circle I try to run, I try to escape bit it's never done. I find the end only to find a begin, there's no way... no one can win! But I will not stop, I won't give in, even if it means I'll never win, to win you need to run the pace but I don't want part of this race. But I will not stop, I believe I am strong, this life we live isn't really that long, and when I die I'll be able to say: "I live my life, and did it may way!" Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
hey this was really great! i think everyone should do it their own way and not follow the "in" group. don't listen to other peoples rules or ways unless you know its right for you. i truely love it. lots of love, dana |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very great poem, but the last line "my" is spelled wrong.... I really liked the poem. Great job on it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
oops...so it is...hehe...thanks, Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
really liked this poem and had a good message to it...thanks for sharing it...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
you go girl! awesome pome! your way or the highway! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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baby0508 Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 58Moodus, Connecticut |
This is a really good poem. The words that you used were very strong.. good for you!!!! |
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