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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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Meditations Whisp'ring my name Like breath Like dream nuzzled in darkness your Face, hidden by shadows a soul reveals your presence Warm glow Blue light dancing Sleep ponders beyond What I will call Perfection Washing of past I rock my head This song to meditation Repetion for forever Sweet To steal the honey To cry in my arms And stick forever Weeping is soon No tears come I slow So we can breath together Fall into your rhythm (meditation) As you fall into mine Heart (MeditAtion) "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was highly interesting. I really liked the format and style you wrote this in. A true treat for me! I liked this a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow...you're really great at capturing the sereaness (sp?) that comes from meditation..i love this piece...i found my mind 'easing' as it were when i read it..great job! "Life is not long and boring, |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This was really different. It kind of has a whispered quality to it, and i like that aspect a lot. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
im with OOC i think the italics made it seem like a whisper..good job! *KiMMiE* |
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