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Crucifix
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 4

0 posted 2001-05-07 02:27 AM

Like the waves of the ocean...my heart turns a tide...sometimes shallow..other times wide...where the current's take me i shall not know...for i am nae is control i mearly follow the flow...my soul washes upon the shore...as i gaze up and the sun upon my skin doth bore...i look around and see that i am alone...far from warmth and far from home....my eyes search for another to share...finding nothing but a sandy beach and air...i begin to ponder the state i am in...wondering if i should try my luck and dive back in...

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2001-05-07 05:36 AM

Wow, I really like your form of writing, it's really different and really amazing to read, there's something that makes it flow nicely...
Anywayz, great imagery here.
Well done.

~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-05-07 12:52 PM

I could get used to this form, but it might take a while.

Hope that's encouragement for you to post more often.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

3 posted 2001-05-07 07:35 PM

i like this one alot~~ its just awsome~

*KiMMiE*

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

4 posted 2001-05-07 07:41 PM

ooh ooh i like this a lot! welcome to passions!!
*Justine*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-13 06:05 PM

Great poem....what the heck! Dive in again!
Never give up unless you're dead of course.
I enjoyed this poem and the formatting was nice too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-16 02:18 AM

i really enjoyed this poem...you have written so well...keep writing as i hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-23 07:25 PM

Keep fighting

I agree with Dopey, dive back in and never give up.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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8 posted 2001-05-23 09:13 PM

wow, this is a really different form. It kind of...cascades, hey like the title! Really nice work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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