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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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As she sprinkles her fingertips and tickles me, pricking my ribs, ink begins dripping... and crippled, I shrivel into a wrinkled, crumpled sheet... Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (edited 05-22-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this......I thought you did very well on this! Wow.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!...i enjoyed this poem...awesome imagery...hope to see more...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ok..my turn now...*shoves dopey and alberta off to the side* WOW!!!!!! short but oh so AWESOME!!!!..this is the last piece im going to read today..and thank you sooo much for writting such great poetry!!!!!!! your words were well chosen..and fit great! bye! "Life is not long and boring, |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i reeslly didn't get this one?!?! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
always an excellent read Master. keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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