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Orange skye
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Orange skye |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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Orange skye Gray dead hand Falling twisting turning From majesty's land Of fire burning bright Like Tiger's soulfull sight Natures and lids Closing to its eye Shutting its orange skye Gray dead hand Clawing screaming grasping Descension so grand To bring silent eye to close Blue minds and gray falsely arose Hiding behind mountains But this orange devil shall fall Life restarts no orange at all Gray Dead hand Twisted Turned Fallen Such beaten gritty sand Moment passage into memory I remember how that hand grasped me Orange skye gone forever Life continues without sun I cry you cry when day done "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
Fantastic! Another beautiful poem. The last few lines really stand out. Great job! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought you did extremely well on this one fozzy. I hope to read more soon.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...dark...yet nice...i enjoyed the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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