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Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-05-22 09:35 PM

What a horrible night to have a curse,
What a horrible night appears,
With but the reading of one more verse,
The Prince of Darkness looks and leers.

What must I do, what must say,
That I might be set free,
From this bondage, from this curse,
That has befallen me.

Weapon in hand, I proceed,
Into this horrible night,
To find a way to break my curse,
To fight with all my might.

I raise the darkness up on high,
And burn it to the ground,
To stop this curse from killing me,
To stop this killing sound.

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*wonders if anyone remembers the game this is based on...*

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

© Copyright 2001 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-05-22 09:59 PM

wow...very descriptive..i loved the flow, format, rhyme scheme..EVERYTHING about it!!..haha..good work thank you very much for the great read!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-23 01:04 AM

This rocked. Very well done here. I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-23 01:12 AM

very powerful...i enjoyed this a lot...and i seemed to have that curse too

...really tho?...thanks for the read...and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

DarkSilver
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 33
Six O'clock High!

4 posted 2001-05-23 01:34 PM

Oh, no all the towns people are going to turn into gouls again. I Remember the game. Castlevania II Simon's Quest I still have it!

It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

5 posted 2001-05-23 02:07 PM

heh..and even though ya whack a bunch of em with the almighty whip (kinky 0.o), they keep on coming....

-Kosetsu

"No one holds command over me.
No man.
No god.
No prince."

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