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Klondike Bob (Hypocrisy of Snow)
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Klondike Bob (Hypocrisy of Snow) |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA 
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Well Klondike Bob is Bob Matevia and he decides if we have shcool or not really. He hardly ever cancels, so we call him (duh) Klondike Bob. The point is, that's all ou need to know other than that there's more to this than meet sthe eye, no protests, nothing, just silent contemplation. enjoy - more to come by the way, I was...inspired by a trauma in my life of late. The hypocrisy of snow As the wind will blow Fell the lament although You can’t see through the snow I hear on the news before Of fronts fighting war And snow I do adore Gathers up too much to ignore I go to bed and doubt That school will be out But hope I’m not without Because all morning, the channels I scout But then, 5:30, I give up hope And go shower, and kinda mope When I come back up, I can cope But then I give it another try to scope School’s cancelled today! I could have been told, in bed, to stay But much to my dismay It’s 5:45, and I don’t even sway I’m wide awake, I HATE the man Who cancels school, I’m definitely not a fan But my simple plan (line was edited) "is to graduate and become a productive citizen of the United States" (gotta love the system and Republicans :-)) It’s a snow day, I should be spared Don’t make me wait, of little I cared Cancel it when people are scared You’ll do better than Klondike Bob fared No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee [This message has been edited by Elvenblood (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I liked the title...  Good ole snow... I found some of the rhyming to be a tad labored, but all in all, it was well done. Good job! |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Hahaha good ol' Yukon Bob-- that's what my class calls him *L* stupid stupid man... I hate how he calls off school at the last minute when half the students are all ready to go, waiting at the bus stop *L* Oh well, I've only got one more year of Yukon man left, so HAHAHA! I like this, it was a great laugh Good job! ,Sara P.S.-- why in HELL do you get up so early?! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You'll most likely need to tidy up a few things within the poem....but it was ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interesting read...i enjoyed it...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
LMFAO!! i love this. it was very creative and i love the rhyming and the flow was good until the end about republicans and crap. lol that was kinda long. Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elvenblood~ thank you |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this poem is cool, it's the same way here in Wisconsin. when it isn't too bad they cancel it, but when it gets really bad that you can barely see it's time to go to school. thanks for makin me laugh. -fear- |
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