You Don't Want To See Me Cry

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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-05-14 04:27 PM

You don't want to see me cry,
but my tears are a part of me,
you hate it when I cry,
but my tears you don't see.
You don't want to make me sad,
so you try to make me smile,
so I laugh but then I cry,
atleast I was happy for a while.
You don't want to see me sad,
you hate it when I'm down,
and when I'm feeling depressed,
you're the one I want around.
You hate it when i'm sad,
you don't even wonder why,
all I know is this,
you don't want to see me cry.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

1 posted 2001-05-14 04:31 PM

that's so cool. i think u put it really well... i know i hate to cry as it lets people see my weaknesses. chin up babe
love, peace and eyeliner
angel
-x-

Each Moment in time is a pinprick in eternity-Marcus Aurilius

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-14 05:27 PM

i liekd it and this is a sad situation... hope everything turns out well...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-05-14 05:57 PM

This was sad because it sounds like the person that you want with you the most when ur sad, is the person who doesn't want to see you sad at all! I'm sorry and wish you the best. This was a really good poem though.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2001-05-15 02:15 PM

well, actually, whenever I'm sad, he's around and he cheers me up.

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-05-15 05:02 PM

This is really cute!

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-16 06:49 PM

~*hugs Allysa*~
you ok?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-17 02:44 AM

She's ok cuz im here...

well done Allysa.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

baby0508
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

8 posted 2001-05-18 09:12 AM

I can totally relate to this poem. It is really good. Keep up the good work and feel free to e mail me if you want to talk. Great poem!!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-05-18 11:11 AM

I can relate sooo well to this poem...this is exactly how my boyfriend and I are. Beautifully written..i really enjoyed it.

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

10 posted 2001-05-21 09:23 AM

yup. I'm alright cause Dopes is here. He's my shoulder to cry on. Mr. Sexy man.......

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

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Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-05-21 09:45 AM

Well, as long as you're ok, that's good enough for me

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

12 posted 2001-05-22 08:33 AM

well, acire, u know I talk to u too. Too much sometimes..........

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

luckyducky_505
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since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

13 posted 2001-05-25 04:21 PM

OMG!!! I totally love this poem!!! It is just like what happened with my best friend and I!!!!

Terryloveiris_85
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

14 posted 2001-05-25 04:38 PM

this was a really good poem. I liked it.
keep it up.
~IRIS

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

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The Hot Girl From Canada

15 posted 2001-05-25 06:00 PM

This poem brought tears to my eyes

I hope everything works out for you

Don't judge a person untill you have walked a mile in their shoes, this way your a mile away from them, and you have their shoes.

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