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Love 101 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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when you are through- loving someone, what makes u sure it wasn’t meant to be, the complexity which ended, the relationship of a life time, who do you preach- this lesson which you learn, first you are student, learning the basis, now you move up the ladder, being the assistant, the behavior is mimicked, and you foolishly decide, to teach the others, love 101. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent writing  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was good stuff..... Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i liked the concept here a lot, you did an excellent job with the central theme. good writing, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the idea, however i feel you could have done a lot more with this. I liked the content you had though. Hope to read more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I like all your remarks. Dopey, how could I have improved it? Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great writing...i enjoyed this quite a bit...thanks for the read...and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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