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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
lost love not understanding leaving for the summer maybe a year maybe forever but please love never fear i cant see life without you maybe you can with out me i never know from day one to two how my life will travel on from this point love for you i will always see i hope you see the same in me love i think for you is so grad but then again maybe never again life is over for no clue have i where you are i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was sweet and beautiful. it had a powerful imapct. feel proud of this poem...definte library lesson Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
forgot to press the little button |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey ben that was awesome! no it didn't sux! kepp spitin thoose poems out lol! cus you better than me hun! ok later robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
you're awesome ben, your just the bestest. you better keep writing, otay? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. Not as good as some of your others but I thought it was ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet poem...i liked it and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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