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Godsend_1
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great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-22 11:31 AM



lost love
not understanding
leaving for the summer
maybe a year
maybe forever
but please love never fear

i cant see life without you
maybe you can with out me
i never know from day one to two
how my life will travel
on from this point

love for you i will always see
i hope you see the same in me
love i think for you is so grad
but then again maybe never again
life is over for no clue have i

where you are

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

© Copyright 2001 Ben Redshaw - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2001-05-22 12:40 PM


this was sweet and beautiful. it had a powerful imapct. feel proud of this poem...definte library  lesson

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Ina
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2 posted 2001-05-22 12:41 PM


forgot to press the little button
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3 posted 2001-05-22 01:09 PM


hey ben that was awesome! no it didn't sux! kepp spitin thoose poems out lol! cus you better than me hun! ok later
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

AngelPoet87
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Indy
4 posted 2001-05-22 04:24 PM


you're awesome ben, your just the bestest. you better keep writing, otay?
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5 posted 2001-05-22 09:06 PM


I liked this one.
Not as good as some of your others but I thought it was ok.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-05-23 02:21 AM


sweet poem...i liked it and keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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