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zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-05-22 07:49 AM

-this is kind of a long poem..But I had to get it all out. This is a very personal poem for me..I am not over this yet.. So.. well, read and enjoy..? -

You're gone, but I wont realize it
I can't accept the fact that you left
I feel like a bird
whit a broken wing
Im stuck in this mess
I can't fly away

My friends says 'forget him'
but they dont have a clue
I cant forget you
because I dont want to
All I want is to love you, to hold you
in my arms, to have you here or at least
remember your face..

And I do. I remember so well..
I can see your face and your sad eyes.
I can hear your voice - so load. so clear.
I wonder..will it always be like this?

My friends says 'Let it go girl'
Oh, they can never understand
They dont know that I held you that nigth
They dont know about your sweet kisses and tender skin
They've never heard you whisper in the dark..

Oh, how I regret on what we did
Every day I ask myself
Was it worth it?
Did you love that nigth?
Or was it just a game?
Do you regret?
.. Will I ever get the answers? I think not

I dont want to see
Still I know it so well
You loved her higher than me
Wherever you are rigth now
-you're with her-
I dont know if I wanna think about it..

Does she know that you laid in my bed that nigth?
Are you forgiven?
You should've known.
Then maybe you wouldn't have been so stupid
I hate you for that, you know

We never spoke out about things
I could've needed to know
I have questions whitout answers
Its things I think of each day
did you ever know about my love?
..Its another thing I do not know

I feel lost. I am down, buried in the mud
And I just feel like sleepin' for a while..
A long while

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-22 11:28 AM

I wish I had the magic words to take your pain away......but, I don't.....so I'll just offer hugs

SEA

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-05-22 07:46 PM

This sounds like what everyone else will say or have said, but I'll say it anyways. Time will heal

It's true, just stay strong. ~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-22 11:14 PM

Time will heal

it's true, just stay strong.

Well done here, I liked it....and yes..long.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-23 01:45 AM

this was a very well told poem thru your emotions...i enjoyed the poem...yet the situation of the poem was sad...hope you are ok...sonn...and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-23 02:30 AM

*hugs zarina tight*

try to understand that you're probably not alone in the circumstances surrounding you now...im sure there are other ppl around you that have been through the same thing...talk it out with them..im sure that that will speed the healing process along its dear little way..

great poem...your emotions shone through like the sun after a morning storm...well done!

*hugs zarina once more before she leaves*

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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