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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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Tossing Turning Not sleeping I'm lost in the sea of life Being tossed about in Poiseidon's waters The waves hit me Like a slap in the face As if they are trying to scare me away Or just break me But I will not give in To the sting of the salty water All it takes is endurance To ride out the storm Or wait to be washed ashore The only question is How long will that be? *~*Amanda*~* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Excellent poem!! I liked this very much!  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem...i enjoyed the read and hope to see more...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is great...i love your reference to poiseidon "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
NoBoDy KnOwS....  Awesome work 'ere. ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
very nice, i like this poem a lot. you have some really great images in this and a strong ending. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done....good question at the end. Anyway the poem was pretty good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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