Teen Poetry #4 |
What about now? |
Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
It comes so naturally, loving you. I can't help it, what I feel. I can't make you, love me. But, oh, how I wish, we could be together. What about now? couldn't we be together? Couldn't we at least try? What about now?....... i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This has a really sweet meaning and the couplets add a nice touch. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad...but written good on that subject...hope thing turn out the ebst for u...keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
*sighs* Oh, how I can relate... well done , Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
i was told by someone today that he doesn't want to date anymore because hes afraid we're getting to close to fast and he doesnt want to get hurt or hurt me~ PISSES ME OFF! How can you just do that?? UGGH! but this poem hit the spot..awesome, keep posting! **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
"what about now, how 'bout tonight, baby for once lets don't think twice..." great country song, now it's stuck in my head i like this, very sweet. keep posting Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done.....I liked this one and wish you luck. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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