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DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

0 posted 2001-05-21 07:41 PM

Walking as if my body is numb
Losing all senses
From a heart that is bleeding
Not sure where I'm going
Knowing I don't want to be there
Looking for a crossroad
A way out
Hoping no one will notice
Wishing that someone would
Screaming for help
In the most unnoticeable way
Searching for answers to questions not asked
Praying for something in a world full of nothing
Repairing my heart with even more pain
Reaching my arms out to you
Finding myself in the only place
Where the scars fade away

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-21 07:57 PM

full of emotions i really liked this poem...told so much...thanks for the read... kat...im glad u posting again...hope to see more...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-05-21 08:53 PM

This was really good. It held so much emotion in one little poem. Keep it up!!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2001-05-22 07:02 AM

Wow, yeah, great emotion in this one. I liked how you were so blunt about everything, but still that wisp of beauty in the words...Great job, and I hope you find it soon.
~Carly

"I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-22 01:38 PM

the ending is beautiful and the poem is well written and heartfelt, i like this a lot. you expressed yourself really well in this, i love this poem.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

5 posted 2001-05-22 06:38 PM

ooo that was sadish and super good hun i really liked it keep posting well i am gonna go and acctually talk to you now so bye i love ya *hugs*

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-22 10:45 PM

Well done here. I thought this was a very honest poem....pretty good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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