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zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-05-21 11:03 AM

There's things you don't know about me.
I have secrets I cannot tell.
You may think you know me well..
I know you don't.

Im not always myself.
Im not always the person you knew.
I can be different

I've done things I regret.
I've seen things I want to forget.
I've made choises and afterwards changed my mind.
Sometimes it was too late.

Im still your friend,
but I have changed.
Im no longer who I was.

It's these things..
These things I cannot tell you,
These things you cannot see.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-05-21 11:09 AM

I liked this one.
I could relate to every line in it.
Great job.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-21 11:29 AM

Very powerful poem here, I didn't find it to be your best, but it sure very powerful.
I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-05-21 11:41 AM

Hey,

This one is going into my library I am not sure just why yet but its my fav. of yours

its really good keep it up. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-21 01:27 PM

i keep getting here after linc... grrrr... oh, well. you did a great job on this poem, i really liked the format of it, the way you set up the stazas was very cool. keep sharing your writing.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-05-21 05:19 PM

There are so many things about me that I know nobody knows, or can see, and they probably never will. So i could relate to this one, and I liked it. Good job.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-21 08:22 PM

very powerful and true in some ways...u have wrote this very well...i liked the poem...thanks for the read...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-06-10 11:30 PM

beautiful read. hope you surpass these mistakes in life and move on. keep sharing

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