Teen Poetry #4 |
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Where I Belong |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Howdy! This is another poem I just got done writing. It's the first poem I have ever written that doesn' rhyme, so let me know what you think. I have no idea where the idea came from... But it's the truth. There are many roads to take in life, and many may lead to anywhere... I have no idea where I belong in life, but I guess I'm in for the ride. The ride of my life... ![]() WHERE I BELONG Walking my way Through this world Trying to find out Where I belong I stop sometimes And take a look Maybe today Will be the day One of these days I'll find my way' I will finally Find the right road I turn to my right; There's many turns I turn to the left; I can't see where it ends I'll have to pick one And take a chance My walk will slow Or it will turn to a run I have faith That I will discover Just who I am And where I belong - Cody - |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
not bad, not bad at all ![]() *TiMMYBoY* |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...i really liked what u were saying in this...thanks for the read... ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice poem. Simply put. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done COdy....soon enough you'll find it all out....but not too soon! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I ask myself the same question, I really like this poem from you and it is great without any rhyming. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just be patient cause the day will surely come ![]() hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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