Teen Poetry #4 |
Where I Belong |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Howdy! This is another poem I just got done writing. It's the first poem I have ever written that doesn' rhyme, so let me know what you think. I have no idea where the idea came from... But it's the truth. There are many roads to take in life, and many may lead to anywhere... I have no idea where I belong in life, but I guess I'm in for the ride. The ride of my life... WHERE I BELONG Walking my way Through this world Trying to find out Where I belong I stop sometimes And take a look Maybe today Will be the day One of these days I'll find my way' I will finally Find the right road I turn to my right; There's many turns I turn to the left; I can't see where it ends I'll have to pick one And take a chance My walk will slow Or it will turn to a run I have faith That I will discover Just who I am And where I belong - Cody - |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
not bad, not bad at all Keep on writin' cowboy. *TiMMYBoY* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...i really liked what u were saying in this...thanks for the read... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice poem. Simply put. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done COdy....soon enough you'll find it all out....but not too soon! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I ask myself the same question, I really like this poem from you and it is great without any rhyming. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just be patient cause the day will surely come hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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