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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-05-19 09:49 AM

I think I owe you something
And that would be an apology
I found something online
That really opened my eyes
An old poem of mine
That told how I felt
When “he” wouldn’t speak
I’m sorry about that
From now on,
I’ll try to talk to you
About whatever is bothering me
Cause, deep down inside
The truth of the matter is
I LOVE YOU!!!

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-05-19 11:25 AM

apologizing can be a very hard thing to do, and a very necessary thing to do in order to help a help a friend ship. i like the way you wrote this, i hope you give it to the person you wrote it for.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-19 12:56 PM

this is excellent

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-19 04:38 PM

I'm not sure I can really comment on the LOVE poems anymore in the sense of giving my opinion on what it's about and askin the story behind it....but I will say that it was well written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-21 02:12 AM

great job...i liked what u were saying in here...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2001-05-21 08:17 AM

apologizing isn't a fun thing to do, some times. It takes a strong person to admit they were wrong and an even stronger one to say 'I'm sorry". ANyways, good poem Tamma. What's going on in your life tho? Feel free to email me any time.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-06-10 07:36 PM

apologies are always a good thing.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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