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How precious Life is (I'm really happy with this one =) )
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How precious Life is (I'm really happy with this one =) ) |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Waking up in the morning, Face the day that is now dawning. No longer do I have to fear, The silence that defied my tears. The sun is shining bright ahead, Gladly reaching my gloomy bed. Life itself I can evoke, Doubts are nothing I now provoke. Battles were things that I did fight, My own uniquness not out of sight. To conjure up a plan for hope, Gaining knowledge to learn to cope. A frantic dash to snare my dreams, Failure to see it as it seems. The stability I now do hold, Is is as precious as solid gold. Emotions now running through me, Enchant my soul delightfully. Leaving imprints of rosey images, Further me on my pilgrimages. Loading me with sentiment, Closer to true enlightenment. Experiencing what humans call giving, Delighted to be finally living. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Anonymousfemale, You should be happy this is a wonderful piece of work and so very positive, very much enjoyed the read. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow this was great keep writting plz i enjoyed it.......  "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A very positive message in this one, and for that on congradulate you. Wonderful job on this poem. Flowed nicely.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
oops double post......might as well the best of it *dances for you*.......*passes out some coca-colas for everybody*.....*dances some more*....... < !signature-->I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...this is a very profound, excellent, outrageous poem. I really like the insight that you provide here. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful poem. I'm so glad that you have come through your trials to see the world in this new light. Thank you for sharing this sight with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This poem awesome!! I don't know what it was but this really spoke to me. Thank you for posting it. I am adding this to my favorites for sure. Keep up the good work!! "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i reallly like this poem. i really feal that i can relate to you poetry keep posting. *i drink dopy's soda* ~Matt~ ~that is my real name~  somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Great job. Thank you for posting this. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
from what I've seen you always do great work but this is exceptional. Even though my dark and blood stained views of the world can be depressing at times this still made me smile. (you should feel special very few things make me smile) anyways wonderful work and keep posting. >¶Øʆ< |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
no wonder your happy with this poem it's awesome!!! great job! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Exquisite AF! Beautifully worded, wonderful rhyme scheme and meter ... just lovely. I'm sooooo glad to see someone state that they are proud of their work ... you have every right to be, this is a great piece, a pleasure to read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
This one truly is good! It is soo inspriational!! I love it!! Keep up the great work!! Much luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well all I can say is wow! Cerenity, Branden, DD, A little girl, LoveBug, Niceguy, Matt, Greeneyes, Poet, Katherine, Kit and Sweet Stuff, thank you so much for your replies. To be honest I didn't exactly think I would get quite as many as I did. Your comments were very warming. It was written at 3:30am Aussie time and it was just after you have gotten the feeling where you can sit back, sigh and not have to think of the next way to fight things off. It was like a pure stream of tranquility was running through my veins. Total peace. PoA, I'm really happy that I brought a smile to your face. It is always a nice thing to know. Oh and thanks for the coke DD. *L* ~AF~< !signature--> "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You definitely should be happy about this one Such a positive outcome this poem gives to the heart i'm glad that you have seen life in a different perspective great job on this one AF bravo!!! I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow... this is so in my library... im going to read this like everyday for inspiration yes its that good AF, and im glad to see some of your beautiful work! ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
How did I ever miss this one? VERY good job on this, EJ! I loved the simple scheme, the layout, the wordings... it was a fine platter of poetry!  And it was cheerful at the end. How unlike you!  Well here's my LATE reply. Back to page one it goes. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, this is an old one! VERY good job, though. This one shows your talent well. Good job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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WaitN4AnAngel Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 37I wish I knew where I was... |
Very good!! Library material. Keep posting!! *Me* |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Helloooooo library! You always amaze me. ALWAYS! I look up to you. Shanks for posting...shanks for bein cool... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, this is def a great poem! Yes definetly library!! lol COOL "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
 life isn't always what we want it to be. My dad always said "Life's a everyday challenge" now I believe it and see it. Your poem was awesome how you wrote it. ~*~Minna~*~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*bump*page one i really liked this poem.. its optimistic..and i like seeing happiness in your heart.. keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
WOW this is AMAZING!!! Not only do I wish I could write this well, but I wish I could be that happy! Must be nice Great work!"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm bumping this so people who missed it will get a 2nd chance "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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