Teen Poetry #4 |
chikin and sox!!!! { dedicated to ewoksters:D |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
ok this one is gonna really confuzle all u ppls unless u knows me and ewoksters lol (we are weird so be forewarned):P lol newayz the spellin and grammer are like that on purpose just so u knows! lookin out me window and what dos i see? ewok standin there and hes eatin all me chikin!! i rush out to stop him cuz i dos loves me chikin and wut does he dos?! he beats me wit me sox :O i stops in utter amazement as a sox plops me in da face then he takes a bite of chikin and really makes me mayad! i jumps on him and threatens his life but all he dos is laughs so i then i starts to tells ppls his whole name and that stops him cold he cowers up before me and so i gets up i grabs me chikin backs but i leaves him me sox (cuz thoses was a gift to him) lol its not finished yets:P so be prepared! lol “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Riveting tale! I was on the edge of my seat! LOL I honestly loved this, the way you spelled some words (chikin!! ) and your odd sort of dialect added a lot to the poem. Great job, I love the tone! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*stares at it* This was interesting hehe. I liked it......ewok must be happy! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Gotta add this to my library! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hahaha....yeah this rocked! A library piece for sure, on the grounds of pure laughter. ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Haha Yes Ewok IS happy. Lol TY Tiff nice one Hehe Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on..... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha Excellent work library time |
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