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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-05-20 03:34 PM

“Thinking of You”

Being here alone
With so much time to think
To think of you

I think of you and your beauty fair
To which no thing upon this earth
Could ever compare

I try to do this so others can see
Just how much you mean to me

I think of your eyes
So brilliantly blue
Not even the sky
Could reach that hue

I think of your hair
So lovely a blonde it seems
The not even the sun
Could reach that golden gleam

I think of your smile
So perfect and white
Entrancing me all the while
Piercing through my darkest night

I think of your physique
So perfect and true
that not even a goddess
could hold next to you

I think to describe you so
Is to take all meaning from it all
For no mere words could ever describe
Your wondrous beauty
Nor the place you hold in my heart

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

[This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 05-20-2001).]

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-05-20 04:32 PM

beautifully written, i liked the interesting format you used in this piece. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2001-05-20 04:53 PM

this was wonderful! beautiful words

keep it up

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-05-20 05:14 PM

Great use of words!
Whoever you had in mind while writing this should feel very special that they have someone that thinks so highly of them.

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

4 posted 2001-05-20 07:43 PM

beautiful poem! i know how it is to have someone or wish you were with someone who seems absolutely perfect... couldn't have described how i felt as well as you did! thanks!

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

5 posted 2001-05-20 07:58 PM

its a beauty trance !!!
awsome job!
*KiMMiE*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-20 08:37 PM

VERY sweet.....I enjoyed this poem very much, and I wish you the best of luck with this person.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

7 posted 2001-05-20 08:42 PM

Thank you all for your replies and thank you for all the kind things you have said.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-05-20 10:15 PM

this is beautiful writing...great poem...i liekd it a lot...thanks for the read...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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