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broken wing
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since 2001-04-30

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0 posted 2001-05-06 11:12 AM

I dont know what to do anymore
I've never felt this way before
You've captured my soul and even my heart
of your love I never want to part
With all this emotion...I'm running scared
Nobody else has ever compared
to the way you make me feel
My hearts desire...I cannot conceal

"The sun in your eyes made some of the lies worth believing."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-06 12:23 PM

I enjoyed this poem a lot and I hope to read some more in the future.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-06 01:09 PM

i liked this poem..and i thought you did quite well...keep writing:superrin:

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-05-06 05:22 PM

"Heart's Desire?" Something simple like that, I'm thinking. This poem only really needs a simple title because the content itself is quite simple.
Well done.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-05-06 05:25 PM

Very nice work, again, Broken. I'm enjoying your work. When I was reading the poem I came up with "My Heart's Desire" as well. Nicely done.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

5 posted 2001-05-06 07:27 PM

wow that was short but sweet. i liked it ummm as for the title i have no clue i have the same problem i never know what to put for a tittle cool poem none the less from me

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2001-05-06 07:34 PM

Ya...keep it simple..
Great poem!!
I LIKED IT!!

~ Jeff ~ :)

"If I'm not back in 5 minutes......just wait longer!"

"You may take our lives, but you'll never take our FREEDOM!!"

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-20 10:13 PM

I was thinking the same thing Allan said

Loved the read and hope to see more from you
specially, the completion of the other poem

thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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