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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: Psyche it's a song! mwhaahaha! Is You: Crawling upon our sadness. We're locked in our steel cages Breaking down the rages Of all the used to be's. Idle roses wither As we beg amongst the king. It's the death that love will bring Cause of the shoulda been's. We're all okay. Shedding our night in day, And all I got to say is is... (chorus x2) Pointing our hateful thumbs. Wondering if you will come To terms with your shattered glass. Will we last? Wearing our Indian hats. We're living like the bats. Will we ever, Ever die? We're all okay. Shedding our night in day, And all I got to say is is... (chorus x2) I miss you  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Niiiccee. One of my favs as far as your songs are concerned. Keep it up, tiger. :.) Vreni |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very meaningful song... i hate to see ya goin through this.. nice job on this one bro besta luck! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow! This is excellent and dark work. I'm just getting into song writing and I can definitely appreciate the effort that goes into it. Well done!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great, great, great song! You always impress, DD! Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
A song? *whines* Ohhhh man!!! Well, I woulda read it even if you had put that in the title box, just cause I'm that sorta guy. Oh yeah, right, the song, not me, yeah, the song is really good, so far I've liked all of your songs I think. Thanks for sharing them. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Dopey, this is great, as is all your work... I always enhoy reading your work... Keep it up... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
awesome lyrics, but hwere is my MP3? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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