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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2001-05-19 10:47 PM

If i were to die tomorrow, what would you do?
Give me one last good-bye kiss.
or consider this a bliss.
Everyone shall remember me in one flashback,
For that is all i am worth.
No one shall really remember who i am.
Or what i did.
No one shall care if i live or die.
For when the end comes, nobody shall even cry.
So this i ask you,
If i were to die tomorrow, what would you do?

Poetry is not just words on paper that may rhyme, but words that are from your heart expressing yourself for others to see from your eyes.

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2001-05-19 11:18 PM

Wow, that is so...wow. I really like the emotion in this. It's very sensitive. Great job.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-20 04:09 AM

the emotion u put it well...that i do relate to a lot of it and sometime during my life i felt the same...thanks for sharing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

joycerogers
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

3 posted 2001-05-20 11:12 AM

A very thought provoking read. Well written to make the reader meditate on it's meaning.

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at Passions In Poetry, by Joyce Click Here

Quiet Thunder, rumble
Through my cloud.
Touch my secret parts
Where only you are allowed. - Joyce Rogers

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-20 01:17 PM

Well done, and believe me people do care for you out there. It's a common feeling to feel as if people in this world couldn't give a care about you, but they do.....
Hope you feel better.
keep posting! You disapeared for a while.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-20 03:57 PM

this is a very pure write as far as how you're feeling. great job on this piece, i hope things get better.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

6 posted 2001-05-20 04:04 PM

I liked this. i know the feeling here. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-05-21 10:25 PM

This was so sad. Please dont think this about yourself, your worth so much to everyone...im saying this to you even tho im completely contradicting the way i feel about myself. I dont think n e 1 will really cry for me much either...it'll be more of a realief to almost everyone...but try and stay strong hun...i hate others to think this way. Im always here for you ::hugs::

~Michele~

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