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Teen Poetry #4

The Point of Worrying?

MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-19 04:58 PM

It Matters not
When you realize you don't care

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-19 05:35 PM

VERY short....makes sense too....I'd suggest to save these for litle after thoughts after a poem you post....but i did like this..

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-05-19 06:57 PM

This was more of a quote than a poem. I think it would be cool if you build off of those 2 lines and turn it into something longer.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-20 03:02 PM

i agree with nikki, i think you could do a little more with this. syill a good thought though.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-21 01:48 AM

you had a great point but you should start the thought you have ended the poem...i liked it as it is but if expanded more i think it would be interetsing...hope to see more tho...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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