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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
~*~this is a really old poem... just found it and posted it for the masses!~*~ A vision is untangiable Beautious to behold Ever so untouchable Serene and yet quite bold A vision is just that a dream, a hope, a yearning But let me share this with you My vision is bright and burning tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very very well done. I liked this poem a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I really like the way that this one flowed. Good work.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i like this, especially the way the last few lines flowed. i always find it interesting when people post poetry that they wrote a while ago, it lets me contrast it with their current work. any, you did a beautiful job here, keep posting your work Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this poem was nice...great job...enjoyed the read...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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