Teen Poetry #4 |
why can't i make you see??? |
~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Why can't I make you see I'm the girl for you? I am the one you love And to me you bid adieu! You told yourself that day It would be too much work, So here I am, alone again All because of your quirk. So here's my farewell to you Maybe you'll remember this one, Most of the things you do or say Cannot be undone. Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you [This message has been edited by ~sugarpie313~ (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Did you mean ADO, or adieu....something like that? Anyway nicely done! I liked this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
well, when i was reading this what popped into my head was that you ended this very nicely and wrote it very well. so that's what i'm writing Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Once again, I FEEL you girl! I totally know how you feel... UGH... freaking ex's! GO AWAY!!! Stupid Paul... stupid Freaking Frank.... GRRRRRRR!!! HEHEHE I like this Val, nice work! , Sara "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
good one here...it kinda makes me smile to know he said it wouldnt work but you KNOW he'll never forget you ahh you're just a constant reminder of what he could have had but nope..he screwed it up..oh well, lol sorry that just happened to me...i was just rambling newho..great job, keep posting *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nicely done...i enjoyed the read and i'm glad you posting again...keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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