Mountain Wildlife (Hey, Look, I used FORMAT) LoL

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Mountain Wildlife (Hey, Look, I used FORMAT) LoL

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-05-19 10:16 AM

Rain falling down to the earth,
Spring has awakened me.
The bird singing outside,
Is the first sign of rebirth.

Flowers begin to bloom,
Roses start to bud.
Children look out the window,
Of their elementary classroom.

The lake is full of life,
And the waterfall is flowing quietly.
The mountain has awaken,
With the animals of wildlife.

Rain stops: sun shines through,
I’ve said it before, so I’ll say it again:
“Living on the mountain,
Is better than visiting the zoo!”

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-05-19 10:49 AM

I liked that. Reminds me of the summer, and how great it's going to be to go camping again soon... Ah, I love the mountains. Anyway, awesome poem, I really enjoyed it, as I do all of your poems. Good Job!

- Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-19 11:36 AM

great images, you really described everthing wonderflly. the use of a little format is a good thing every once and a while

keep sharing your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-05-19 12:55 PM

I like the images that you created.

very nice poem

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-05-19 01:21 PM

Tamma hun this was absolutely great! *L* i loved it! i think it's the only poem of yours i've read that has had a format

hahaha and your right, living on the mountain is better then visiting the zoo! *L* but at the zoo you have bars between u and those mountain lions hahaha

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 05:03 PM

Nature....w0h00!
Yea i like nature......this was good tamma....very good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-21 02:00 AM

beautiful imagery...wonderful poem...i enjoyed this a lot and i did see the format

...hope to see more...

...?

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