Teen Poetry #4 |
Mountain Wildlife (Hey, Look, I used FORMAT) LoL |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Rain falling down to the earth, Spring has awakened me. The bird singing outside, Is the first sign of rebirth. Flowers begin to bloom, Roses start to bud. Children look out the window, Of their elementary classroom. The lake is full of life, And the waterfall is flowing quietly. The mountain has awaken, With the animals of wildlife. Rain stops: sun shines through, I’ve said it before, so I’ll say it again: “Living on the mountain, Is better than visiting the zoo!” Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I liked that. Reminds me of the summer, and how great it's going to be to go camping again soon... Ah, I love the mountains. Anyway, awesome poem, I really enjoyed it, as I do all of your poems. Good Job! - Cody - |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
great images, you really described everthing wonderflly. the use of a little format is a good thing every once and a while keep sharing your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
I like the images that you created. very nice poem |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Tamma hun this was absolutely great! *L* i loved it! i think it's the only poem of yours i've read that has had a format hahaha and your right, living on the mountain is better then visiting the zoo! *L* but at the zoo you have bars between u and those mountain lions hahaha Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nature....w0h00! Yea i like nature......this was good tamma....very good. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful imagery...wonderful poem...i enjoyed this a lot and i did see the format ...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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