Teen Poetry #4 |
Sunset |
chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Yellow streaks the horizon The ribbons of purple swirl Around me. I kneel there And watch the crimson move Through scarlet tides. The setting sun Burns with envy at the Rising moon For the sun has never seen The night And never will As long as it's alive. [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
nice image that you made here |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh..I like this |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was surely wonderful....I really liked this. You are impressing me by the post! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
beautiful imagery, i love this piece. this gets added to my library, definetely one of my favorites from you. keep sharing all your work with us Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
stupid button Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great imagery...and written nicely...i really liked this piece the ending was awesome...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so beautiful i could actually see teh sunset in my head |
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DarkSilver Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 33Six O'clock High! |
you are starting to annoy me leah you keep ending up being good at all sorts of stuff. Poetry is one more you are beggining to beat me in. AHHHG! (Charlie Brown Style) It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga |
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