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Teen Poetry #4

you and no other

zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-05-25 07:02 AM

-I hate this poem myself.. *grin* It's just too..I dont know what... -

You are the ligth in my day
You are the sun in my world
You are the smile on my face
You are the joy in my thougths
You are the flame in my life
     You're my pride
     You're my hope
     You're my luck
     my happiness
     my love
     my heart
   You are the one,
   You are everything to me.
   YOU - and no other!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-25 04:48 PM

i liked the poem...great example of what love is...though i hope you have given this poem for the poem itw as written for...it seemed like he doesnt know...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

2 posted 2001-05-25 07:51 PM

good job here. i liked this one. And i agree with albert that its a good example of what love is. keep it up.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-26 05:12 PM

Sounds like pure devotion to me. Hope all runs well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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