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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-05-19 04:23 AM


IM BACK!!
WHO MISSED ME????

heres a lovely piece dedicated to my sweet sister callie... i just wish she was still alive..
I wonder if she was scared
Or knew that she would die
Wondering if she would live
Or if anyone heard her cries.

I wonder what she was thinking
When she started to fall
Did anyone see it happen?
Or even hear her call?

Callie was just like us
Wanting to see cool bands
But when things went awfully wrong,
No-one lent a helping hand.

They kept pushing and never stopped
Why did it happen on this day?

Her family's life is shattered
All there hapiness blown away.
Unable to run from her attacker
She fell to the ground
Her body lay still
But no-one ever heard a sound.

As she fought for her life,
Limp Bizkit received the blame.
Whois fault was it?
Or was it just a mistake?

With sadness in my heart
And her picture in my mind...

Callies innocence...
I will always find....



© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
banburycross
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viginia
1 posted 2001-05-19 11:17 AM


we all missed you sarah    i'm really sorry that this happened, this is a beautiful tribute, i love this poem.  i really hope things get better, and email me if you need someone to talk to  

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

SEA
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2 posted 2001-05-19 12:55 PM


Sarah~ this just breaks my heart....I'm so sorry hon...truly...I don't know what to say, but I hope you keep expressing your feelings.....it helps. Hugs~ SEA
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3 posted 2001-05-19 04:59 PM


Well done.....my condolences.....very very sad.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-05-20 04:04 AM


hey u back! ...but yea as all have said...this is sad...and im sorry to hear this had happened...and u expressed yourself very well...i liked the poem...and hope to see more...and post more often sarah

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

princess^sarah
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5 posted 2001-05-20 10:57 PM


*pounces on annonomous_albert and cuddles and cuddles him

missed ooo

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