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i hold your hand |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i hold your hand in church every single Sunday i always point out that your socks and tie never match your suit i hold your hand in church trying to keep from noticing the way it cant stop shaking the way you get frailer everyday the way that your dying i hold your hand in church loving the contrast of your rough against my soft of your wrinkles against my smooth loving just being there with you i hold your hand in church every single Sunday wondering if it will be my last chance just to be there with you holding your hand in church this is about my Taw Taw “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This deserves recognition, I hope everyone reads it. It's so sweet and heart-warming. This is about your grandfather, right? It's so sad to watch the ones we love grow older, but I believe you captured your feelings wonderfully!!! I loved this! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
AWWWWWWWWWWWW This was so sad  I've had a rough year this year, when it comes to people I know Dying(there have been 5 deaths in my family since Christmas). But What has forced me thru all of the funerals was the fact that they were in a better place, and with the last one, He was with his dear wife again. Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is a really incredible picture that you have painted with your words. the piece is very sweet and melancholy, great job on this poem Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so sad...it really is a tough thing watching those that you love grow old...This was a great poem..::hugs hun:: |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow i really like this one alot, you obviously put alot of heart into this...and now atleast you know if it is your last sunday with them, you spent it with them, and they know ya love them and they luv you!  awsome job*KiMMiE* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done....quite sad here. It hit me hard.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
i agree with everyone... it's a fantastic piece of writing that hits everyone who reads it hard. brilliant work. love peace and eyeliner angel -x- tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is sad and such imagery told it so...thanks for sharing this pgreat piece...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*hugs Tiff*~ It's never easy losing someone or the thought of losing someone either. Be strong my friend and I applaud you for showing such strength in this poem. keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl...you're making me cry......this is so sweet....just enjoy each Sunday and hold those memories in your heart |
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