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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-18 05:19 PM


Sweet dreams never forgotten
just swept under the mind
subconsciously pretending
dreaming of this world
you reach for the stars
the sun and the moon
you strive for the great
and get more then you imagined
subconsciouly pretending
lost in the reality this world
sweet dreams never forgotten
just swept under the mind

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
banburycross
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viginia
1 posted 2001-05-18 05:57 PM


i like the lines that you repeat in this one, very cool image and very thought-provoking.  you did an excellent job as always, keep posting and replying.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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2 posted 2001-05-19 03:31 PM


I enjoyed it very much tiff....keep posting and i'll keep reading.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-20 04:06 AM


this was a nice read...i enjoyed it...keep writing...tiff

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-05-21 10:13 PM


This was a very nice read...theres something magical about dreams which i just love!!! Keep dreamin hun and keep writing  
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5 posted 2001-06-05 06:50 PM


That was very good.  Never though of it that way.  You got me thinking.  ~*applauds*~

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele,

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