Teen Poetry #4 |
Dreams |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Sweet dreams never forgotten just swept under the mind subconsciously pretending dreaming of this world you reach for the stars the sun and the moon you strive for the great and get more then you imagined subconsciouly pretending lost in the reality this world sweet dreams never forgotten just swept under the mind “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i like the lines that you repeat in this one, very cool image and very thought-provoking. you did an excellent job as always, keep posting and replying. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed it very much tiff....keep posting and i'll keep reading. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a nice read...i enjoyed it...keep writing...tiff if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very nice read...theres something magical about dreams which i just love!!! Keep dreamin hun and keep writing |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was very good. Never though of it that way. You got me thinking. ~*applauds*~ hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele, |
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