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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-05-17 02:13 AM


you're there when i'm sad.
you lend me your shoulder to cry.
listens to me talk about things no one else knows.

you're a good friend.
always there when i need to talk.
i'm glad you're my friend.
i wouldn't want it any other way.
  thank you ben.

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-18 08:30 AM


this is a nice tribute, very sweet    there are however a lot of bens on here, i was curious as to which one it is.  anyway, good job, keep writing

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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2 posted 2001-05-18 08:40 AM


True friendship is to be treasured, that's for sure! I really love this piece, and I'm sure your friend will love it also. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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3 posted 2001-05-18 05:51 PM


Wonderful tribute to Ben....i'm sure he'll love it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-05-19 01:27 PM


Whichever ben it may be...    
He'll love this.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-05-19 04:54 PM


its about me guys (knows this cuz robin is an awesome friend of mine) thank you robin you are one of the coolest ppl like ever hun i love ya dearly have a great day (hugs and kisses*

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

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6 posted 2001-05-19 10:49 PM


yes it is about you ben!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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7 posted 2001-05-21 02:13 AM


this was a nice tribute...and i enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing it... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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8 posted 2001-05-25 10:28 PM


Well ben certaintly does sound like an excellent friend and this is a very nice tribute to him!
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9 posted 2001-05-29 06:42 PM


Lovely tribute to a friend
He must be a really good friend
keep sharing
thanks for the read

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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