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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2001-05-18 06:40 PM


Hello.  I just wrote this one a bit ago.  Lately I've been feeling like I don't really have anybody that really cares about me or really loves me...  Which kinda sucks, it's not a very good feeling.  But anyway, I'll live as always, so here this is.  Let me know what ya think!


WHAT I NEED

What I need
Is someone to love
Someone to be loving me
Someone to help me rise above

What I need
Is someone to care
Someone who will listen
When I say life's unfair

What I need
Is a shoulder to cry on
Someone who will hold me
When my heart is completely gone

What I need
Is someone...
What I nee
Is something...

What I need
Is you.

      - Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

© Copyright 2001 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-05-18 06:45 PM


very very touching.....goes right to the heart and I do believe all can relate to this one    SEA
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2 posted 2001-05-19 10:13 AM


I have felt this way many tymes in the past, and in fact I've been having issues with my boyfriend lately, but then i foudn an OLD poem of mine and it really helped me see what was really going wrong in our relationship.

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

banburycross
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viginia
3 posted 2001-05-19 11:29 AM


you expressed yourself beautifully and poured a lot of yourself into this.  if you need someone to talk to, please send me and email and talk to me.  this kind of feeling is never a good one to have...

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-05-19 04:29 PM


Me? :blushes: Awwww shucks!

No well this poem was great but I hope you find that special someone cody! You deserve it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-21 02:18 AM


this was sweet and i hope u found that love in ur life...i liked this poem alot...thanks for the read... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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