Teen Poetry #4 |
What I Need |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hello. I just wrote this one a bit ago. Lately I've been feeling like I don't really have anybody that really cares about me or really loves me... Which kinda sucks, it's not a very good feeling. But anyway, I'll live as always, so here this is. Let me know what ya think! WHAT I NEED What I need Is someone to love Someone to be loving me Someone to help me rise above What I need Is someone to care Someone who will listen When I say life's unfair What I need Is a shoulder to cry on Someone who will hold me When my heart is completely gone What I need Is someone... What I nee Is something... What I need Is you. - Cody - |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very very touching.....goes right to the heart and I do believe all can relate to this one SEA |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I have felt this way many tymes in the past, and in fact I've been having issues with my boyfriend lately, but then i foudn an OLD poem of mine and it really helped me see what was really going wrong in our relationship. Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you expressed yourself beautifully and poured a lot of yourself into this. if you need someone to talk to, please send me and email and talk to me. this kind of feeling is never a good one to have... Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Me? :blushes: Awwww shucks! No well this poem was great but I hope you find that special someone cody! You deserve it! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was sweet and i hope u found that love in ur life...i liked this poem alot...thanks for the read... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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