Teen Poetry #4 |
Moving On |
starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
"Moving On" Being your friend has proved to be a great thrill, a good rush. Every minute has been touching, exciting, fun and full of laughs. We're moving on- hopefully together. I don't want to drift apart. Please stay in touch, make new friends- but keep the old. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm giving this poem to my friends for the end of the year. many of us are splitting and going to different high schools. what'd you think of it? Please Tell me how you think I could make it better!! <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you." [This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think it's very sweet.....I think it would take a lot to individualize one for each friend....so this is good....and hopefully you'll include an address, email or something a phone # for them to be able to stay in touch. A good idea is to get a blank address book and have everyone fill in their info so you have it. SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it....thought it was fine along with the suggestions of SEA. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is nice...and will be a nice tribute...thanks for sharing it...keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
A nice tribute to what must be a great friendship. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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