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starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-05-19 01:04 PM

"Moving On"

Being your friend
has proved to be
a great thrill, a good rush.

Every minute has been
touching, exciting, fun
and full of laughs.

We're moving on-
hopefully together.
I don't want to drift apart.

Please stay in touch,
make new friends-
but keep the old.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm giving this poem to my friends for the end of the year. many of us are splitting and going to different high schools.

what'd you think of it? Please Tell me how you think I could make it better!!

<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

[This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 05-19-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-19 01:17 PM

I think it's very sweet.....I think it would take a lot to individualize one for each friend....so this is good....and hopefully you'll include an address, email or something a phone # for them to be able to stay in touch. A good idea is to get a blank address book and have everyone fill in their info so you have it.