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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
The crowded hallways Engulf me So many minds So many minds. I look up, Only to look right into the face Of a barrier. Where is the sky? And then I close my eyes I feel the sky So far above me. No line, nor edge Can stop me. We are one. My mind flows freely Away from the grasps Of the earth. Illimitable am I. [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much!  |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's a shame what the font did to the word "Illimitable." It might have just as easily read "LLLimitable." Heh....  I recommend you change this to Times or something so that isn't a problem anymore.Still, I thought the poem was very well written. It flowed good due to its limited line size. Keep sharing. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Thanks for the post, but I don't know how to change the font...could someone give me a little nudge? I need a little help...hehe. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Do a little dance....that changes the font  Actually you have to go to the MEMBERS area/Help then go to your preferences..or ummm.profile....not sure which one...and then it's there well done on the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
or you could when ur posting ur next poem... you have the option to choose what font you would like to use...you cant do that when you need to edit tho (which sux) but newayz u prolly already know that huh? :P i always see the preview b4 hand so ill know wut its gonna lookies likes. so try that next time *has to put her 2 cents ins* newayz i loved this poem! i liked it very much and its another one of yours thats goin to my library. so woo hoo for you.  tiff  *clicks on da lil button down theres* “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me I want to hear you say "Well done" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
thanks very much everyone! And thanks for the "two cents"...I'M NOW 2¢ RICHER! WOOO!!! hehe. And...NO SMOKING DOPEY_DOPE! BAAD FOR YOU! ¤ ¢Ha§ïÑg RäIñ ¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a freeing poem!! ahhh refreshing!! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...different but i enjoyed the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
oops!  if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Not a bad post Leah. The thing is gave me a feeling of you not facing reality. That's not good. You should. There are time when you have to face it. But, all in all, I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele, |
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