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zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-05-20 05:22 AM

Don't look at me that way
You know what it does to me
I know I can't have you
So please don't make it worse..

When you look at me like that
You give me that hope
Im not supposed to have
You give me that happiness
Im not supposed to get
You give me that emptiness
The feeling that tells me you should've been here

You have her. You do love her.
So, why give me false hope?
What, Do you try to make me happy?
You know I want you.
I know I can't have you.
Why do you play me this way?

What I see in your eyes
It shouldn't have been there
It should not be there
Not For Me.
Oh no, not for me.

Yet I want it there.
And I blame myself for that..
Please don't tempt me so,
when you afterwards say I must go..

If you love her,
Don't look at me so
Don't play me this game
You know that I love you.
You know that this is hurting.
So please, I beg you,
Don't look at me so..

..Don't play me that way..

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2001-05-20 05:29 AM

ok first i would smack that guy a dozen times for playin around like that! unfortunenately it's happen to me so you're not alone girly!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-05-20 11:48 AM

Good poem Zarina....and such a common situation to be in. A horrible situation....but your poem expressed the feelings from it very well. I liked this one.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-20 01:14 PM

Well done zarina. I enjoyed this poem very much. Sounds like a bad situation to be in. Hope you get through it healthy.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

4 posted 2001-05-20 03:54 PM

this is a really hard postition to be in, i hope the situation improves. you wrote this beautifully, the feeling in it is wonderful. keep sharing your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

mistic
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since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

5 posted 2001-05-20 09:29 PM

I like the emotion you let show through in this poem. very nice.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-20 11:13 PM

your emotion were written well..in this poem...i enjoyed it...and keep writing...

...?

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-05-22 08:02 AM

This sounds like torture hun!

Great poem

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

8 posted 2001-05-22 08:11 AM

Well done, a great poem... hope you get through ok

Zu

Jenn Cirrincione

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9 posted 2001-05-22 08:50 AM

I think that men are just as confused as us in these things. I bet he feels a lot for you, but his relationship hinders him freedom to be with you. It's no excuse, I know, but just a thought.
Show him this, and tell him how you feel. If that doesn't help, I'd go with the smacking him thing! Wonderful read.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

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East Haddam, CT

10 posted 2001-05-22 09:49 AM

This one made me really sad, because I could definitely relate to it. No guy should make you think that they like you when they really don't. It's called leadng on, and it sucks.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-05-22 11:37 AM

it is such a rotten thing.....definately can relate.....

zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

12 posted 2001-05-22 12:26 PM

everyone: thank you for responding!

I have to admit Iam having a terrible time. However, the guy this poem is about is all gone now.. So I just have to forget him. The poem 'Untitled again..' is also about him.. *sigh* well... I'll be over it. some day...

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
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13 posted 2001-06-12 02:54 PM

I got an idea....tell him you'll tell his girl

good job Zarina
thanks for the read
keep sharing

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Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

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14 posted 2001-06-12 05:09 PM

i liked the poem very much and i know what u mean and it goes both ways for a man and a women and i also hate when that happens. i hope u good luck on finding what your looking for.

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