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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-05-18 01:45 PM




Wanna play?

Do you wanna play a game?
Its really fun
you get a car , you drive
around
stop and buy some alcohol
your winning keep it up!!
Knock back  a couple more
get back in the car
can you still walk in a straight
line?
I hope not, cause then  we cant
continue
Start playing and speeding
on the high way
watch out ! you didnt hit the tree!
You lost the game!
C'mon drink a little more
drive a little faster
do you see that car full of kids?
go for it!
go really fast!
O man you won and now
your dead and so are
the kids
You won the game
they were right
your are stupid!

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-18 01:53 PM


the message was a good one...and you wrote this one quite powerful...great job...and keep writing ina... i liked it... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Acies
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2 posted 2001-05-18 02:19 PM


He is dumb!!!
Glad you know thta drinking and driving don't mix
great message

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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3 posted 2001-05-18 06:00 PM


Good message regi!
You really do know how to express that!
Learn from this kids!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 247
great state of illinois
4 posted 2001-05-18 06:43 PM


wow an amazingly powerfull power very cool regina your awesome hun keep it up love ya *hugs*


ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11
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5 posted 2001-05-19 12:40 PM


You're absolutely right.  Powerful message, well stated.  Have a save prom season, everyone!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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