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Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-05-18 12:14 PM

Stars above
Twinkle and sparkle
Happily almost
As if they share some deep secret with each other
I gaze up at these stars
Wondering if I am wihsing upon the right one
Because my wishes never seem to come true

Are these stars laughing at me?
Mocking me perhaps?
Are they talking amongst themselves?
Giggling at me because I believe a star will make my wishes come true?
Thats OK
I'll make my dreams come true...

Stars above
Twinkle and sparkle
I gaze up at them
And laugh.

I wanted to write a good, happy poem.

Did I succeed??

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-18 12:33 PM

...yes you did...and i enjoyed this poem...thanks for the read...and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Hidden
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 18
Lost in my own world

2 posted 2001-05-18 12:42 PM

I really like this poem. It would be great to have the strength to just basically say screw wishing on the stars i can do it all myself... I wish i could do that. Great poem. I think you've found a hidden talent.

**One of the most adventurous things left for us is to go to sleep. For no one can lay a hand on our dreams.**

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-19 12:30 PM

I have a weakness for poems about stars and i dont know why lol..i guess cuz they seem so magical. But this poem was excellent...keep up the great work!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-19 04:48 PM

Yes you succeeded......well done! i liked it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-06-07 11:45 PM

You did an outstanding job. Yes, you did succeed in doing it. beautiful write. Hope to see more from you again. Keep sharing

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