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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-05-18 02:39 AM


umm dont know where this come from but there ya gos.....it might sux and all that but o wells

you dont make any sense
you constantly change your mind
always switching the facts
for your own personal gain
lying through your teeth
as you smile and look guileless
your a hypocrite
a perfect hypocrite

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"You say i only hear what i want too..."

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-18 02:42 AM


i enjoyed what you were getting at but the message lacked something maybe adding etc...i dunno to be honest...you seem to be getting somewhere with your thought but to me it seemed it wa scutt off...i liked it tho... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"


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anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-05-18 05:33 AM


Quite a powerful message in here, Tiff. I definitely love what you have expressed here. It's short, but it's sweet so it's going to the library.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

~*brittt*~
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3 posted 2001-05-18 08:46 AM


hypocrites suck. I feel it.
~britt~    

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4 posted 2001-05-18 05:53 PM


Yes, but i feel it more  
Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-05-21 10:09 AM


Ok, one question...Why do you even surround yourself with such a person?  Stay away from this person.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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6 posted 2001-05-26 11:06 AM


Yea i agree with acire get away from this person
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7 posted 2001-05-30 04:06 AM


ah the hypocrite, a perfect paradox with crossed fingers. The poem wasn't the best out of what I have read of your work but thats understandable because you have written some really good stuff.

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

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8 posted 2001-05-30 06:05 AM


Ahhh, well good poem! I feel really strange bout this topic. I hate hypocrisy...it really irritates me. And yet, sometimes I can be just like that. I try not to, but sometimes I really just do CHANGE my mind. Well, at least I'm now coming to terms with the hypocrisy. LOL

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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