Teen Poetry #4 |
hypocrite |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
umm dont know where this come from but there ya gos.....it might sux and all that but o wells you dont make any sense you constantly change your mind always switching the facts for your own personal gain lying through your teeth as you smile and look guileless your a hypocrite a perfect hypocrite “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed what you were getting at but the message lacked something maybe adding etc...i dunno to be honest...you seem to be getting somewhere with your thought but to me it seemed it wa scutt off...i liked it tho... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Quite a powerful message in here, Tiff. I definitely love what you have expressed here. It's short, but it's sweet so it's going to the library. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
hypocrites suck. I feel it. ~britt~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, but i feel it more Well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ok, one question...Why do you even surround yourself with such a person? Stay away from this person. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea i agree with acire get away from this person |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
ah the hypocrite, a perfect paradox with crossed fingers. The poem wasn't the best out of what I have read of your work but thats understandable because you have written some really good stuff. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh, well good poem! I feel really strange bout this topic. I hate hypocrisy...it really irritates me. And yet, sometimes I can be just like that. I try not to, but sometimes I really just do CHANGE my mind. Well, at least I'm now coming to terms with the hypocrisy. LOL "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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